Narrative T2 W7

“Where did everyone go?!” I scream but no one was there to answer. My name is Tangaroa. All I can remember is that I was fishing. I was walking along the shallow part of the sea and I started getting dizzy. I felt more and more water coming up against my hip, against my hip I was getting dragged into a rip and the last thing I saw was a boat floating away in a distances. As I was getting dragged into the rip I caught a slimy ugly crayfish swimming around like it was on a holiday. I quickly grabbed it and held it tight, as the rip finished I was at another land. I called Mystery island. All I had for my company was a crayfish I was starving to death and had nothing to eat except leaves and sand. My voice was getting huskier and my throat was getting sore every time I swallow .I had no choice but to eat my crayfish, my only company, until I realized that I stopped starving. I decided to take a swim because I was burning hot and I was growing scabies because I wasn’t looking after my skin properly and treating it good enough. As I was swimming I saw this gleaming shiny thing in the water. I dived down and It was a compass then I looked behind myself and there was this ugly fish I had found. It was the most ugliest most terrible fish I had ever seen in my entire life. I tried catching it, it but then the fish bit me and I started bleeding like hell 4-5 minutes after I turned into a merman. I had a Sapphire tinted tail with streaks of midnight black. When I found the compass I looked at the back of it and it said “You must find a watch and there will be your next clue”. So I swam looking for a watch and then I came across a cave, and inside the cave there was the golden treasure hidden. Inside was a watch I opened the treasure box and I grabbed the watch. I looked at the back of the watch and I read the next clue, it said “You need to swim back to shore and when you get there I want you to say “I am mighty so set me free 3 times and you will be back to human”. So I swam as fast as I can and then I said “I am mighty so set me free” 3 times and then I was transformed back to normal . The End

Moonlight Narrative.

Use this picture to create a narrative story.

Remember:

• Figurative Language
• Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
• Structure (O, P, S, R)
• Precise (interesting) words
• Speaking parts between characters
• Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:

A cold night settled down in a sea. Blue sky looking like they are  waves.A small island lonely waiting for someone to come and visit it, Wind blowing as it is trying to make the tree fall into the water.

The tree is reflecting on the water as it is like looking in the mirror. The Sea is beautiful than it can every be sky light flashing down.You can’t hear anything.

Just wind speeding past your ear like the wind.Suddenly a wolf came out of the blues and in his hands he had, had an axe in his hand so he can chop down the tree. He raised his hand and off he went.

He just chopped down the tree like he was at war.As he chopped down the tree he thought about what he had done.He left he jumped into the water and swam to shore.The tre was floating around like a eel.

So the wolf said before he left R.I.P tree.So the tree lived happily ever after in heaven.

Scary halloween House Narrative.

Looking at a scary house on halloween makes me scared because the trees looking like they have arms and legs and they are gonna catch you when you knock on the doors and say trick or treat. Paint vanishing every second you look somewhere else. “Is it haunted did someone die in there”?. As is walk on the grass I can see insects crawling on my leg tickling my feet as it makes me dance. The lights going on and off on and off as it is likely to blow. Windows opening and shutting as it is going to smash. I can hear the clock ticking as I keep walking towards the door. As I step onto the stairs I can hear a crackling noise from down the bottom. Step by step I take as I am walking up the stairs. I get to the door I see a bell so off I went to ring it DING DONG no one answers. So I ring it again DING DONG an old scary man is walking towards the door so I take a step back just for safety the old scary man answers the door and said “ what do you want” I said with a frighten voice “Trick or Treat” he ignore me so I tried again “ Trick or Treat he heard me but he did not do anything so he just slammed the door and went back inside I thought to myself what a mean and silly old man. I kicked the door and said “ You silly mean old man”. I did not know that I had made him angry so he came out of his house and said to me “Get lost you silly child”