Friday 8 November 2013

Moonlight Narrative.



Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
  • Figurative Language
  • Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
  • Structure (O, P, S, R)
  • Precise (interesting) words
  • Speaking parts between characters
  • Character and Setting descriptions!

Start here:
A cold night settled down in a sea. Blue sky looking like they are  waves.A small island lonely waiting for someone to come and visit it, Wind blowing as it is trying to make the tree fall into the water.

The tree is reflecting on the water as it is like looking in the mirror. The Sea is beautiful than it can every be sky light flashing down.You can’t hear anything.

Just wind speeding past your ear like the wind.Suddenly a wolf came out of the blues and in his hands he had, had an axe in his hand so he can chop down the tree. He raised his hand and off he went.

He just chopped down the tree like he was at war.As he chopped down the tree he thought about what he had done.He left he jumped into the water and swam to shore.The tre was floating around like a eel.

So the wolf said before he left R.I.P tree.So the tree lived happily ever after in heaven.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey Quitah!!

I love your Narrative it is so descriptive I love how you made it up it's so Imaging to me.

Next time add some more figurative language and use lot's of your imagining next time okay.

Anonymous said...

Hi Quitah,

One thing I love about your blog post is that you used some of the writing features.

One thing you could work on next time is your spelling.

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