I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms Aireen and Whaea Petra.
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Friday, 22 November 2013
Sum Dog Math Activity.
This is the leader board for the sumdog competition. |
And this is me coming first in the tower climb game on sumdog. |
Monday, 18 November 2013
Thursday, 14 November 2013
Tuesday, 12 November 2013
Monday, 11 November 2013
Screenshots Of My Basic Fact.
Friday, 8 November 2013
Moonlight Narrative.
Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Structure (O, P, S, R)
- Precise (interesting) words
- Speaking parts between characters
- Character and Setting descriptions!
Start here:
A cold night settled down in a sea. Blue sky looking like they are waves.A small island lonely waiting for someone to come and visit it, Wind blowing as it is trying to make the tree fall into the water.
The tree is reflecting on the water as it is like looking in the mirror. The Sea is beautiful than it can every be sky light flashing down.You can’t hear anything.
Just wind speeding past your ear like the wind.Suddenly a wolf came out of the blues and in his hands he had, had an axe in his hand so he can chop down the tree. He raised his hand and off he went.
He just chopped down the tree like he was at war.As he chopped down the tree he thought about what he had done.He left he jumped into the water and swam to shore.The tre was floating around like a eel.
So the wolf said before he left R.I.P tree.So the tree lived happily ever after in heaven.
Thursday, 7 November 2013
Friday, 1 November 2013
Baby Elephant Narrative.
One sunny day lived a baby elephant named Joey. He was a lonely elephant he would swim by himself, he would eat by himself, and he would have a walk by himself.
My skin was rough as a rock my mother and father had died from salvation I was taking a walk and then BOOM, CRASH I had crashed into a tree because he was too busy looking on the ground thinking about his mother and his father.
I had no friends at all. So I went back to the africa to go to sleep. As he was walking he could see my habitat, and it was all ruined all of my tents was all ripped up I thought it must be the hunters.
He thought that because his mother and father died from them so that was Joey’s nightmare hunters joey ran to hide so he won’t die but BANG I bumped into one of the hunters but Maria then kicked him in leg and slapped him with my trunk.
Joey ran as fast as I can so they other hunters won’t catch him. So I ran and he ran like a jet plane but the jet plane doesn't run.
And then I looked back and I had lost the hunters.
Thursday, 31 October 2013
Scary halloween House Narrative.
Looking at a scary house on halloween makes me scared because the trees looking like they have arms and legs and they are gonna catch you when you knock on the doors and say trick or treat.
Paint vanishing every second you look somewhere else. “Is it haunted did someone die in there”?. As is walk on the grass I can see insects crawling on my leg tickling my feet as it makes me dance.
The lights going on and off on and off as it is likely to blow. Windows opening and shutting as it is going to smash. I can hear the clock ticking as I keep walking towards the door.
As I step onto the stairs I can hear a crackling noise from down the bottom. Step by step I take as I am walking up the stairs. I get to the door I see a bell so off I went to ring it DING DONG no one answers.
So I ring it again DING DONG an old scary man is walking towards the door so I take a step back just for safety the old scary man answers the door and said “ what do you want” I said with a frighten voice
“Trick or Treat” he ignore me so I tried again “ Trick or Treat he heard me but he did not do anything so he just slammed the door and went back inside I thought to myself what a mean and silly old man.
I kicked the door and said “ You silly mean old man”. I did not know that I had made him angry so he came out of his house and said to me “Get lost you silly child”
Wednesday, 30 October 2013
Comprehension Activity.
This is my comprehension activity that I have been playing and I am learning how to type without looking. |
Studyladder Activity.
For this activity I was practicing my Rounding and I got 3 wrong so that tells me I need to practice more. |
Tsunami narrative Writing T4.
Sumdog Activity.
In this games I have been practicing my division and my times table. My goal is to be faster at answering the question. |
Thursday, 24 October 2013
Wednesday, 23 October 2013
Tuesday, 22 October 2013
Monday, 21 October 2013
Friday, 18 October 2013
Thursday, 17 October 2013
Tuesday, 15 October 2013
Cannon Math Learning.
This is a math game called Cannon math this helps you learn your +, divided by's, and your times it haves different types of question and it keeps on getting harder and harder |
Monday, 14 October 2013
Basic Facts 2013 Term 4.
This is my first thing I did when I got back from the holidays it is my basic facts I got just one wrong and that means I have been working well. |
Tuesday, 24 September 2013
Friday, 20 September 2013
Storm Description.
Title: Rain Struggling.
Author: Quitah Laile
Description:
Scary rain trying to drown me as I am swimming across the water.I scream for help and all that replied was the wind scaring me with fright.Houses getting shocked down as the power lines fall.The water running at my face as I am trying to speak.The rain struggling as it is trying to stop.I can hear a million trees swooshing and blowing across my ears.Thunder got my attention as I was trying to survive.The storm forcing me as it is paralyzing me with fear in my eyes.I struggle as I am swimming across to the other side and as I do I could feel this thing underneath my feet it felt like a rock.Power line electric shot me as I am in the water.The water runs away from the drain wanting to survive.The wind kills the heaviness in the rain.
Dragon Fire.
Description Title:Dragon Fire
Author:Quitah Laile
Start story here:
It was a furious evening when something just shot out of my head I stood there still like a crystal frightened of what was going to happen I heard a sound of a fire blasting out of the corner shining in my eyes wanting them to be blind. It was a dragon.The village screams to DEATH as the dragon viously flies out of the corner.Villages getting burnt from all the breath the dragon takes he doesn’t realize what he has done to the earth. `` Paralyzed when I saw the fear in the dragons eyes it shock me with fear. I felt like someone is trying to kill me at night.The dragon spoke with his fire and I said to myself “ What's going on” I heard the sound again and.The dragon fired the whole world until he could see smoke rising from the top to the bottom he made sure no one was alive.The smoke tried to kill me as I caufed it felt like I was poisoned I didn’t feel well. The dragon caught attention as it tried to kill me I froze like nothing was going to happen I closed my eyes and counted to 10 and when I open my eyes the dragon vanished. As I look around every where I could just see pitch grey because of all the smoke that the dragon had did with his mean scary outrageous beastly fire. The dragons skin look like a rock been scraped apart but uglier it had bumps all over his skins the sky been shot from all the smoke travelling through through them. The dragon was more scared than me and much more frightened than me.. An hour later the smoke disappeared from a blink I took I could not believe it. The fire beasting out of the dragons mouth
like it wants to burn me.
Author:Quitah Laile
Start story here:
It was a furious evening when something just shot out of my head I stood there still like a crystal frightened of what was going to happen I heard a sound of a fire blasting out of the corner shining in my eyes wanting them to be blind. It was a dragon.The village screams to DEATH as the dragon viously flies out of the corner.Villages getting burnt from all the breath the dragon takes he doesn’t realize what he has done to the earth. `` Paralyzed when I saw the fear in the dragons eyes it shock me with fear. I felt like someone is trying to kill me at night.The dragon spoke with his fire and I said to myself “ What's going on” I heard the sound again and.The dragon fired the whole world until he could see smoke rising from the top to the bottom he made sure no one was alive.The smoke tried to kill me as I caufed it felt like I was poisoned I didn’t feel well. The dragon caught attention as it tried to kill me I froze like nothing was going to happen I closed my eyes and counted to 10 and when I open my eyes the dragon vanished. As I look around every where I could just see pitch grey because of all the smoke that the dragon had did with his mean scary outrageous beastly fire. The dragons skin look like a rock been scraped apart but uglier it had bumps all over his skins the sky been shot from all the smoke travelling through through them. The dragon was more scared than me and much more frightened than me.. An hour later the smoke disappeared from a blink I took I could not believe it. The fire beasting out of the dragons mouth
like it wants to burn me.
Frackle Frog Spelling Game.
Today on Friday I am playing a game called Frackle Frog And I have been On level 4 the word I was spelling was sheet. |
Thursday, 19 September 2013
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