I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Ms Aireen and Whaea Petra.
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Friday, 22 November 2013
Sum Dog Math Activity.
This is the leader board for the sumdog competition. |
And this is me coming first in the tower climb game on sumdog. |
Monday, 18 November 2013
Thursday, 14 November 2013
Tuesday, 12 November 2013
Monday, 11 November 2013
Screenshots Of My Basic Fact.
Friday, 8 November 2013
Moonlight Narrative.
Use this picture to create a narrative story.
Remember:
- Figurative Language
- Sentence Lengths (short, middle, long)
- Structure (O, P, S, R)
- Precise (interesting) words
- Speaking parts between characters
- Character and Setting descriptions!
Start here:
A cold night settled down in a sea. Blue sky looking like they are waves.A small island lonely waiting for someone to come and visit it, Wind blowing as it is trying to make the tree fall into the water.
The tree is reflecting on the water as it is like looking in the mirror. The Sea is beautiful than it can every be sky light flashing down.You can’t hear anything.
Just wind speeding past your ear like the wind.Suddenly a wolf came out of the blues and in his hands he had, had an axe in his hand so he can chop down the tree. He raised his hand and off he went.
He just chopped down the tree like he was at war.As he chopped down the tree he thought about what he had done.He left he jumped into the water and swam to shore.The tre was floating around like a eel.
So the wolf said before he left R.I.P tree.So the tree lived happily ever after in heaven.
Thursday, 7 November 2013
Friday, 1 November 2013
Baby Elephant Narrative.
One sunny day lived a baby elephant named Joey. He was a lonely elephant he would swim by himself, he would eat by himself, and he would have a walk by himself.
My skin was rough as a rock my mother and father had died from salvation I was taking a walk and then BOOM, CRASH I had crashed into a tree because he was too busy looking on the ground thinking about his mother and his father.
I had no friends at all. So I went back to the africa to go to sleep. As he was walking he could see my habitat, and it was all ruined all of my tents was all ripped up I thought it must be the hunters.
He thought that because his mother and father died from them so that was Joey’s nightmare hunters joey ran to hide so he won’t die but BANG I bumped into one of the hunters but Maria then kicked him in leg and slapped him with my trunk.
Joey ran as fast as I can so they other hunters won’t catch him. So I ran and he ran like a jet plane but the jet plane doesn't run.
And then I looked back and I had lost the hunters.
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