Wednesday 20 March 2013

Quitah's spooky house


Wooden windows
Black and old.
scary trees.
plain.
crooked chimney.
smells.
no windows.
paint.
I can see the paint vanishing away as it is turning black. I could see the weather getting scary as the trees are going side to side, The clouds were forming together like cars in a traffic jam. ..I can also taste burnt wood on my lips. I could see bats flying over the house everywhere around the roof and ghosts looking through the window. i could hear weird noises coming from the inside of the house, it sounded like a girl that was trapped inside the spooky house. there was a ghost sitting next to the girl.
as i was walking towards the house i could hear the girl screaming  “help!!!”

i ran inside but the girl stopped screaming i couldn’t keep track of her.
But i saw some foot-prints heading towards the kitchen doors.when i got to the kitchen i saw the girl trying to hide away from the ghost but the ghost keeps finding her. the ghost was Bloody mary who was a  very scary ghost i will never go back to that spooky house again.

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